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Dua's avatar

Wow. I could analyze this piece as someone lost in the emptiness and imagining loneliness as the best companion ?✨🌹 Although, I know that might not be what you intended but this piece leaves a lasting impression on the mind. 🫶🏻✨ It's something that could be read over and over again and also, could be analyzed from various angles. The imagery us beautiful and hauntingly empty, I loved the line where you described people walking past the glass, disappearing into the night.

Wither's avatar

Thank you. I think pieces like this aren't really understood with the mind. They're recognized by someone who has quietly carried a similar silence.🖤

AËLA's avatar

The chair was empty.

Then they imagined someone

sitting down without asking —

not to rescue them.

Just to find their hand

as though it had always

been expected there.

The chair stopped looking empty.

— AËLA

Lawrence Omoregie Jr's avatar

What an amazing piece Wither.

Thank you for sharing

I'm enjoying work

I'll be subbing, also glad to have found you.

I'd like if you could check out my pieces and kindly connect(Sub) back if it resonates.

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Do have a great read and and lovely day As we grow together here